Latest Activity In Study Groups

Join Your Study Groups

VU Past Papers, MCQs and More

We non-commercial site working hard since 2009 to facilitate learning Read More. We can't keep up without your support. Donate.

Felt pleasant everyone,
when touched them morning breeze
Birds sang in the air,
the life's melodies

shone delightfully
as the sun smiled
Flowers in gardens waved as if,
they had drunk some vine

Clouds moved calmly,
in a charming way
Ah what a wonderful world!
that all would say

Children moved here and there,
as they freely played
Peace and love was wherever,
shone sun's ray

All the rights fulfilled
and the duties done well
Such was the world where,
people had dwelled

blood of innocent here was
never even shed
I dreamt of all this
as I just slept

I got up, thought of it,
but I was terrorised
Of what went on in reality,
as I visualised

Blood of innocents is shed
each and every day
contrary of what I dreamt,
for that none gets to pay

no right is completely fulfilled,
nor the duties performed fully
the conflicts and differences
then result eventually

A child here is a war's victim,
in war can he freely play?
no one knows whether they're
going to survive the other day

Clouds, of what they see,
rain for they weep,
children's corpses and that of husbands,
in laps as women keep

when the bloody land the sun sees,
with sorrow it grieves
flowers andtrees wonder what
with this man achieves

After seeing all this,
will melodies the birds sing?
A breeze feels pleasant no more
for tyranny to we cling

A lot of times I have heard,
that dreams do really come true
turn my dream into reality,
oh my God I beseech You

Views: 175

Reply to This

Replies to This Discussion

Really Nice poetry, is this your own?

Mitti Pao jee Shiary tai

Yes all of which I have posted are mine

Really 0ws0me yar, such a good talent you have. Try to focus on some productive poetry which portray a moral guidance to the society....its not criticism on your present poetry, just a suggestion..

All the best to you...

Thank you and may God accept these.. I try my best to put some message in my poems... And please you are free to comment be it only for the sake of criticism.


Looking For Something? Search Below

VIP Member Badge & Others

How to Get This Badge at Your Profile DP


Management: Admins ::: Moderators

Other Awards Badges List Moderators Group

Latest Activity

© 2021   Created by + M.Tariq Malik.   Powered by

Promote Us  |  Report an Issue  |  Privacy Policy  |  Terms of Service