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Business and Technical English (Eng201)

 

Fall 2017

Assignment No. 1

 

Q1. The following is an example of an inappropriate resume. Improve this in a way that makes it presentable to the readers.                                                 (10 Marks)

 

 

Khalid Habib                                         1515 Ravi Lane

Nishtar road

Khalid.habib@live.com

 

Objective                                    A want a good job that pays lots of money!

 

Experience                                 2005–2008 PEL Pakistan, Lahore

 

                                                   District Sales Manager

  • Increase regional sales.

  • Manage 250 sales representatives.

  • Made training course for new recruits — speeding profitability.

 

2008–2012 Arbor Shoes,

 

National Sales Manager

• Increase sales from $50 million to $100 million.

• Double sales per representative.

• Suggest new products.

                                                        

 

                                                         2012–2017 Uniliver Pakistan

 

Sales Representative

• Expande sales by 400%.

• Receive company’s highest sales award four years in a row.

• Develope a training course.

 

Education                               2000-2004 UMT LAHORE

                        B.A., Business Administration and Computer Science.

 

Interests

 

                                     Southridge Board of Directors, running, gardening, carpentry,

                                              computers, going to clubs, playing the flute.

 

 

References                               On meeting.

Q2. Keeping in mind the principle of conciseness, revise the following sentences to state their meaning in fewer words. Avoid the use of passive voice, repetition and vague phrases & clauses.                                                                                    (5*2=10 Marks)                                            

Sr. No.

Wordy Sentence

Concise Form

For example:

Working as a pupil under someone who develops photos was an experience that helped me learn a lot.

Working as a photo technician's apprentice was an educational experience.

1.

During that time period, many car buyers preferred cars that were pink in color and shiny in appearance.

 

2.

The microscope revealed a group of organisms that were round in shape and peculiar in nature. 

 

3.

The politician talked about several of the merits of after-school programs in his speech.

 

4.

Our Website has made available many of the things you can use for making a decision on the best dentist.

 

5.

On several different occasions, the manager of human relations met with the employees to ascertain whether or not they were in agreement with the company’s policies in regard to expense reports.

 

                              

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