sister boht ache kavish hay .. MASHA ALLAH
tanz o mazah adab ke aik inthai nazuk sinf hay .. is maydan main qadam rakhna yaqinan qably sataish hay .
i apricate u ....
i think mazeed acha likhnay k lia ye books ap k lia mufeed sabit honge:
1.khakam badahn 2. charag talay by mushtaq yousfee
3. Pitras k mazameen by pitras bukharee
4. khumar e gandum by ibn e insha
5. papar karary by Qari mansoor
i again apriciate u on this brilliant effort
InshaALLAH apki recomended books zaroor parho ge
wah wah great effort yaar.........muje to boht maza aya ye column per k.
keep it up...
bohot achi koshish..keep it up..nd keep writing
v funny k cmnts se agree krti hoon
Secondly, iss hi topic pr bohot kch or likha ja skta hai....mukhtasi pairaye main phr b ap ne bohot kch bayan kyaa..
Overall a very nyc attempt...:)
Zafeena, Its really a nice effort to write something different unlike Serious columns. But I think you need sense of humor in your writing, it is like this ... agar koi serious topic ho aur ap Tanz o Mazah kuch is tarah karain keh log us ki seriousness ko bhi samjh jain aur is kay sath ap kay mazah se bhi lutf andoz hon. in dono cheezon ko sath lay kar chalna paray ga InshAllah behtareen Column takhleeq ho sakta hay.
Secondly, Never mention your "Zaati raay" like you did in above column unless its in humor sense. Be neutral never show a reader that you are expressing your own views. People would ultimately love that piece of writing. Finally Improve your spelling skills and ideas should flow like readers are feeling all this. I would like to read your next column n Best of luck.
Note: very_funny recommended you a very good collection of Books, try reading these books.